Murder in the city
Written by Aron B
June went to his high school which was famous in the city, Harbear. He was 17 years old. He was a smart and brilliant student, and he was good at studying. He was the leader of the students in his school for studying. He seemed an almost perfect guy but he also had a big secret in his family like common people. He doesn’t have his mother. He had only a father, Son. His mom was killed by a murderer that was famous in the city so people called the murderer ‘the Shadow’. June’s mom died when he was 10 years old. Nobody knew about the Shadow and couldn’t arrest him. The Shadow was not the real name. 7 years later, he decided kill the Shadow for his mom and citizens. He grew without a mother so he didn’t know about love or friendship. However surly, He really liked his mom and followed.
He had one closest friend Jacky. They had known each other since they were born. They didn’t have secrets each other even they knew anything about each other so he also knew what June wanted. Jackie has helped to find the Shadow.
Their only interest was finding the Shadow so they studied harder than other students. Every day after school finished, they went the places that the Shadow appeared to kill people. One day, June said “Today we are going to go to mountain that nearby your house.”
Jacky said,”Ok let’s go.”
When they almost the top of the mountain, Jacky found some strange thing “there is some suspicious house under the big tree. Let’s try to go inside” Jacky said. They went inside and there were too many dusts even it seemed nobody live. When they were looking around inside, June found some old leather book.
“Hey, Jacky come over here. I found something I think this is the Shadow’s diary. I think we can find his motive” June said.
“Are you sure? Let me see… yeah that’s right! This is really important clue even we can guess where the Shadow will appear” Jacky said.
“Ok but how can we guess? Umm…… in the diary, we can see that the Shadow killed only women” June said.
“Wait a minute! You said the Shadow killed only women right? And I think they belong in the education institutions because your mom was a high school teacher. Even these days, some principals were killed in our city. “Let me see… yeah in the diary, there is the other famous school’s president who was killed 3 years ago” Jacky said.
It was especially cold and windy morning. Jackie and June came out of that house and ran to the ministry of education institution because the ministry of education grandeur was still alive. He was the last person who belongs in the education institution in the city. They arrived there and looked around.
“June, there are too many people. How can we find him? In addition, we are 17years old! How can we arrest him? I don’t have a confidence.”
“Hey, Jacky you know. I have waited for this moment. Finally I could arrest him. In that diary, the Shadow always wore the blue mask and the red hat. The grandeur is going to go outside for his schedule. “At that time, the shadow will appear with some weapons.” June said.
“Wow. Sounds good! The Shadow would have a gun and we would die. Anyways, let’s wait.” Jacky complained.
About 5 minutes later, the grandeur went outside and they ran toward him quickly but they could know they were late. The bullet already passed the grandeur’s heart with really big sound “BANG!!BANG!!!”
At that moment, they couldn’t move and their legs are trembled. June’s Face became pale.
“Hold on, June! We should chase him! He is running away.” Jacky said.
“Yes… We should chase him. Let’s go I think he is running away toward the mountain.”
They chased him and one minute later, the Shadow stopped to run and suddenly, looked back. He stared them. They were confused and they also stopped chasing. There were no sounds for several minutes. Finally the Shadow opened his mouth.
“I know and I remember your mother, Suzan” That was his first word.
After June heard the shadow’s first word, he was angry. He couldn’t bear to ask why did you kill my mom?
“Now you are really angry right? Even I killed your mom very cruelty... your blood will boil Just kill me like I killed your mother” he gave wicked smile and threw short sword toward June. The Shadow didn’t have any weapons except the short sword so now he didn’t have anything. That was chance. That would be the last chance to kill him.
When June grabbed that short sword, the tears flowed on June’s face.
“You know? Why did I kill the people who belong in the education institutions? Because they spoiled my life! My sun committed suicide because he had got stress from education. They made and taught wrong things….” The Shadow said
“Now did you understand? I already achieved my aim. I revenged…. Just kill me. Now I want to follow my sun”
June stood and began to walk toward him and the sword was on his right hand. The wind started to blow strong.
“Hey….June…I know what you are felling now, but think about that. If you kill him you will also become murder…like him…. He just wants to spoil your life. Your mom will not be happy” Jacky said “Please, listen to my word.
“Just ignore! I killed your mom cruelty! She said save me…save me… but I killed” He gave strange smile.
June didn’t stop to walk and gradually walked faster…and faster… He reached in front of the Shadow. “Please June, Please listen my word!” Jacky screamed. June didn’t say any words until reach in front of him.
June lift up his right hand with the sword and pierced with big sound.
“Ahhhhhhhh” June’s voice
“No!!!!!!” Jacky screamed.
“Ahhhhhhhhh” the Shadow’s voice
The Shadow closed the eyes and several seconds later, he could know June just hit through left hand.
“Why...you...Didn’t kill...Me..?” he surprised and soon, he passed out.
Jacky breathed a sigh of relief and hugged June. “Good job...my friend we won. You really did well..” Jacky said. June dropped. Soon, police officers came and arrested the Shadow. Maybe...He will spend his left life in the jail. When they were arresting him, He woke up and then stared them.
He asked with be surprised eyes “Why you didn’t kill me? Silly boy. That was the last chance. You missed and maybe…You will get sense of guilty forever for your mom and it will bother you forever like I was...”
June answered “No...I will not. I forgave you and my mom also will forgive you and Suzan doesn’t want me to be a criminal. You are so foolish and pitiful person...If you forgave before killed them, then you didn’t have to live like this life...you are so pitiful person…”
“Oh...June, your mom will be proud of you...” Jacky whispered.
“No way… No...No... No!! It can’t happen No!!” the Shadow shrieked.
The wind was still blowing very strong and that was the last memory about the Shadow in June’s head. He felt like his mom is smiling through cloud.
Edited by: Mr.Krahn
He had one closest friend Jacky. They had known each other since they were born. They didn’t have secrets each other even they knew anything about each other so he also knew what June wanted. Jackie has helped to find the Shadow.
Their only interest was finding the Shadow so they studied harder than other students. Every day after school finished, they went the places that the Shadow appeared to kill people. One day, June said “Today we are going to go to mountain that nearby your house.”
Jacky said,”Ok let’s go.”
When they almost the top of the mountain, Jacky found some strange thing “there is some suspicious house under the big tree. Let’s try to go inside” Jacky said. They went inside and there were too many dusts even it seemed nobody live. When they were looking around inside, June found some old leather book.
“Hey, Jacky come over here. I found something I think this is the Shadow’s diary. I think we can find his motive” June said.
“Are you sure? Let me see… yeah that’s right! This is really important clue even we can guess where the Shadow will appear” Jacky said.
“Ok but how can we guess? Umm…… in the diary, we can see that the Shadow killed only women” June said.
“Wait a minute! You said the Shadow killed only women right? And I think they belong in the education institutions because your mom was a high school teacher. Even these days, some principals were killed in our city. “Let me see… yeah in the diary, there is the other famous school’s president who was killed 3 years ago” Jacky said.
It was especially cold and windy morning. Jackie and June came out of that house and ran to the ministry of education institution because the ministry of education grandeur was still alive. He was the last person who belongs in the education institution in the city. They arrived there and looked around.
“June, there are too many people. How can we find him? In addition, we are 17years old! How can we arrest him? I don’t have a confidence.”
“Hey, Jacky you know. I have waited for this moment. Finally I could arrest him. In that diary, the Shadow always wore the blue mask and the red hat. The grandeur is going to go outside for his schedule. “At that time, the shadow will appear with some weapons.” June said.
“Wow. Sounds good! The Shadow would have a gun and we would die. Anyways, let’s wait.” Jacky complained.
About 5 minutes later, the grandeur went outside and they ran toward him quickly but they could know they were late. The bullet already passed the grandeur’s heart with really big sound “BANG!!BANG!!!”
At that moment, they couldn’t move and their legs are trembled. June’s Face became pale.
“Hold on, June! We should chase him! He is running away.” Jacky said.
“Yes… We should chase him. Let’s go I think he is running away toward the mountain.”
They chased him and one minute later, the Shadow stopped to run and suddenly, looked back. He stared them. They were confused and they also stopped chasing. There were no sounds for several minutes. Finally the Shadow opened his mouth.
“I know and I remember your mother, Suzan” That was his first word.
After June heard the shadow’s first word, he was angry. He couldn’t bear to ask why did you kill my mom?
“Now you are really angry right? Even I killed your mom very cruelty... your blood will boil Just kill me like I killed your mother” he gave wicked smile and threw short sword toward June. The Shadow didn’t have any weapons except the short sword so now he didn’t have anything. That was chance. That would be the last chance to kill him.
When June grabbed that short sword, the tears flowed on June’s face.
“You know? Why did I kill the people who belong in the education institutions? Because they spoiled my life! My sun committed suicide because he had got stress from education. They made and taught wrong things….” The Shadow said
“Now did you understand? I already achieved my aim. I revenged…. Just kill me. Now I want to follow my sun”
June stood and began to walk toward him and the sword was on his right hand. The wind started to blow strong.
“Hey….June…I know what you are felling now, but think about that. If you kill him you will also become murder…like him…. He just wants to spoil your life. Your mom will not be happy” Jacky said “Please, listen to my word.
“Just ignore! I killed your mom cruelty! She said save me…save me… but I killed” He gave strange smile.
June didn’t stop to walk and gradually walked faster…and faster… He reached in front of the Shadow. “Please June, Please listen my word!” Jacky screamed. June didn’t say any words until reach in front of him.
June lift up his right hand with the sword and pierced with big sound.
“Ahhhhhhhh” June’s voice
“No!!!!!!” Jacky screamed.
“Ahhhhhhhhh” the Shadow’s voice
The Shadow closed the eyes and several seconds later, he could know June just hit through left hand.
“Why...you...Didn’t kill...Me..?” he surprised and soon, he passed out.
Jacky breathed a sigh of relief and hugged June. “Good job...my friend we won. You really did well..” Jacky said. June dropped. Soon, police officers came and arrested the Shadow. Maybe...He will spend his left life in the jail. When they were arresting him, He woke up and then stared them.
He asked with be surprised eyes “Why you didn’t kill me? Silly boy. That was the last chance. You missed and maybe…You will get sense of guilty forever for your mom and it will bother you forever like I was...”
June answered “No...I will not. I forgave you and my mom also will forgive you and Suzan doesn’t want me to be a criminal. You are so foolish and pitiful person...If you forgave before killed them, then you didn’t have to live like this life...you are so pitiful person…”
“Oh...June, your mom will be proud of you...” Jacky whispered.
“No way… No...No... No!! It can’t happen No!!” the Shadow shrieked.
The wind was still blowing very strong and that was the last memory about the Shadow in June’s head. He felt like his mom is smiling through cloud.
Edited by: Mr.Krahn